Haiku Chat 9 ~ Haiku Inevitability ~

N: It is first light here

Shyam: Yes

N: first light - / a dog barks into / crickets' cries

Shyam: Good haiku

N: Thank you

Shyam:

white flowers glow
in cool twilight ~
tiny spring moon

N: more dawn light / colours reborn into / fresh cognition  

N: Very good.  Post it

Shyam: :) Thank you

Shyam: This is great too.  Quiet rudra, very subtle

N: I see

N: It is actually shasei... what I see here

Shyam: Yes

N: Yes

N: I will post these later

N: I have already posted one haiku and five translations

Shyam: I saw that

Shyam: It's excellent

N: Thank you

N: Yes

Shyam:

vishnu sahasranaamam
at last twilight ~
lamps sway
in gentle breeze

N: Just a second

Shyam: Too much twilight?

N: No, that is okay

N: It comes everyday

Shyam: Yes

N: ...but whether "last" is required is my doubt

Shyam:

vishnu sahasranaamam
at twilight ~ lamps sway
in gentle breeze

N:

vishnu sahasranaamam
lamps sway
in gentle breeze

N: or...

Shyam:

vishnu sahasranaamam ~
twilight lamps sway
in gentle breeze

N:

vishnu sahasranaamam ~
twilight lamps sway
in gentle breeze

Shyam: :)

Shyam: Yes

N: :)

N: I did not see yours

Shyam: I know

Shyam: So it stands

N: That is what we seek among all haijin-s  ~ absolute inevitability

Shyam: Yes, I see

N: "Inevitability defines its tonality", as I wrote about free verse

Shyam: Yes

Shyam: Thats a great poem

Shyam: It taught me how to write

N: I see

N: You remember that?

Shyam: Of course

N: Yes, it is slightly didactic

N: Though it was more justifying