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the young goat
the young goat
Posted by Maria Tirenescu Sat, Apr 12th 2008, 14:31

A child so much pure

saving the pascal lamb-

the Nature's daughter
"Pascal lamb" (Haiku) posted by Vasile Moldovan Fri, May 16th 2008, 13:01
  

smiling little ones

each cuddling the other

~  motherly chums
"instinctively" (Haiku) posted by Rebba Singh Sun, May 4th 2008, 13:04
  

a little girl
hugs a little goat ~
a beatific smile


"a little girl" (Haiku) posted by Narayanan Raghunathan Sat, Apr 26th 2008, 04:22
  
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Dear Vasile, thank you for this beautiful deeply symbolic religious haiku. I learned the meaning of "Pascal's Lamb" and in fact your haiku elucidated the meaning better. Also happy to see you writing here again.

I have a small suggestion: "Nature" is generally not preceded by "the", being an abstract noun. So last line should perhaps be "Nature's daughter"
Shyam Santhanam Tue, May 20th 2008, 11:10  
  

Also, Maria, thank you for the wonderful photos that have inspired so many good haiku.
Shyam Santhanam Tue, May 20th 2008, 11:12  
  

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