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THE PLAY OF RED COLORS
THE PLAY OF RED COLORS
Posted by Silvija Butkovic Thu, Apr 17th 2008, 06:48
lizard on the roof
changing colours ~ muddy  
to red to green
"lizard" (Haiku) posted by Narayanan Raghunathan Fri, May 16th 2008, 21:46
  

clay tiles cool

the hut's roof...

summer blues
"hutment" (Haiku) posted by Rebba Singh Fri, Apr 18th 2008, 10:33
  
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Dear Rebba I have a doubt if a verb may make the Haiku richer !

clay tiles (shine/glow)
on the hut's roof...
a cool summer

Just check and do what you think is appropriate.

Narayanan Raghunathan Sun, Apr 20th 2008, 21:37  
  

hukum...
Rebba Singh Tue, May 6th 2008, 03:34  
  

Yes ! Rebba "cool" brings another sensitivity and with "summer blues" makes this Haiku special in some sense!
Narayanan Raghunathan Fri, May 16th 2008, 21:42  
  

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