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Posted by
Maria Tirenescu
Thu, Jun 26th 2008, 13:42
creature of the night ~
charcoal fur, fire eyes
mild in daylight
"transformation" (
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Shyam Santhanam
Tue, Aug 26th 2008, 02:21
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Dear Rebba, "intentionally" [ with so many syllables ] may be deleted (in my opinion)! {It may be left as understood } or may be you intended it "intentionally" also to rhyme with hungry!! [ pun "unintented" ! ]
Narayanan Raghunathan
Fri, Jun 27th 2008, 01:31
Hello Rebba, I am not sure now which version is better ! It maybe better you retain the original !
Narayanan Raghunathan
Fri, Jun 27th 2008, 21:39
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