hukum...
...'gasps'...?
but that shows hurt...for 'housed' space...on second thought you are right...there is truth there...in gasp...
and 'grasps'...now sounds aggressive to my ears...kind of 'jabardasti' - as in 'without consent' of the trees...
but then the 'silences of trees' is the breath...
Very evocative and uniquely marks Maria's Photo.
I have a doubt whether it should be "space grasps for breath" ~ Do as you feel is suitable!
I must mention again your photo Haiku are turning outstanding!
...'gasps'...?
but that shows hurt...for 'housed' space...on second thought you are right...there is truth there...in gasp...
and 'grasps'...now sounds aggressive to my ears...kind of 'jabardasti' - as in 'without consent' of the trees...
but then the 'silences of trees' is the breath...
and now i'm not changing it...say what you may...
sorry it was "gasps"
"Grasps" was typo error !!
I don't think "for" is necessary too.
But generally "gasps" is followed by "for' !