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Lost in dreams
Lost in dreams
Posted by Magdalena Dale Wed, Jun 24th 2009, 06:03

floundering moth

through green garden cloth

God doth

 
"floundering moth" (Haiku) posted by Joseph Connolly Mon, Jul 20th 2009, 17:36
  
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Thank you!

After his choice
a white butterfly
lost in dreams
Magdalena Dale Wed, Jun 24th 2009, 07:00  
  
You are right. But here the word dream is in my haiku and you hadn't use it again.

A life for a day (the butterfly) and a dream for entire life (that's me). Finally for me it isn't a day dream but my way...

Thank you!
Magdalena Dale Wed, Jun 24th 2009, 10:35  
  
The second tarenga :)

Thank you again!
Magdalena Dale Wed, Jun 24th 2009, 10:59  
  
Tarenga means the shortest renku, a haiku and two lines, two poets.
Magdalena Dale Wed, Jun 24th 2009, 13:01  
  
Thank you, Joseph!
Magdalena Dale Tue, Jul 21st 2009, 07:57  
  
Grand conversation!
_I see... the only think I know of choice and time, is that -dream- of... birth to death.
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Magyar Tue, Jul 21st 2009, 08:28  
  
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