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an injudicious application
 
Posted by Nanda Kumar Mon, Jan 4th 2010, 06:16 :: English

his never-say-die
spirit is, alas, applied
only to gambling

 



 

(his never-say-die
spirit is spiritedly
applied to gambling)


  

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I am also not sure which entry is better!
Yes! The first entry is better! The second version is closer to an aphorism!!
Narayanan Raghunathan Tue, Jan 5th 2010, 08:45  
  
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