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delusion
 
Posted by Nanda Kumar Tue, Feb 16th 2010, 00:47 :: English

the crow swoops
down on the redhead:
a delectable headload?

 

( the crow swoops
down on the redhead~
a nice headload?)

a true story: the crow must have thought that the redhead was carrying some foodstuff on her head! She got a small scratch on the head....

  

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Dear Nanda "delectable" is preferable to "nice" because it is more specific to taste and hence the delusion is better comprehended.

Very observant Haiku and surely unique!
Narayanan Raghunathan Wed, Feb 17th 2010, 08:04  
  
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