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| Posted by Maria Tirenescu Wed, Mar 7th 2007, 05:47 :: | |||
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the wind shakes the plum petals – I open the umbrella
(romanian) Vântul scutură petale de prun – deschid umbrela
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| This a lovely neo-classical haiku. It has plum petals which are an early Spring kigo. The umbrella also indicates it may be generally raining in this haijin's surrounding season. It expresses a solitary playful sentiment of using this umbrella for something its not intended for ~ to sheild from the falling petals. It's a little brief inner monologue with nature or a quiet intimate joke. | |
| Shyam Santhanam Fri, Mar 9th 2007, 07:55 | |
| Thank you for the honour of commenting my haiku. |
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| Maria Tirenescu Sat, Mar 10th 2007, 12:41 | |
| persian translation :baad takan midahad/golbarghaye aloo/baz mikonam chatr ra | |
| sarah Tue, Mar 20th 2007, 15:35 | |
| Thank you, Sarah! | |
| Maria Tirenescu Sun, Mar 25th 2007, 08:27 | |