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first dream
 
Posted by Maria Tirenescu Mon, Jan 16th 2012, 15:49 :: English
my first dream –
saving two little animals
in front of the waterway
Romanian translation by Maria Tirenescu. Posted on Mon, Jan 16th 2012, 15:50
primul meu vis -
salvând animăluţe
din calea apei

  

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Yes Maria Tirenescu, very touching:In the last line, "in front" may be better than "at front"
Narayanan Raghunathan Tue, Jan 17th 2012, 21:33  
  
Thank you! I corrected.
Maria Tirenescu Wed, Jan 18th 2012, 01:55  
  
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