Thank You Keith! The author acts as a conduit to the sensitive reader's perception! Your reading in some ways, essentially completes, the ritual of my haiku. We are writing haiku for friends and their comments not only are valuable, they grant the haiku an inner aesthetic legitimacy!
Thank you John for the rhythmic translation! Phonetically it sounds better than my English original!
Thank you John for the rhythmic translation! Phonetically it sounds better than my English original!