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On a cloudy day
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| Posted by M. Kei Sun, Apr 29th 2007, 10:24 :: English | |||
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a shallow sky leaves my heart no room to stand; I bow my head and carry heaven on my back |
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| I have been writing sedoka off and on because sometimes a poem wants to be longer than a tanka. | |||
| Comments | |
| Very Good and inventive ! | |
| Narayanan Raghunathan Mon, Apr 30th 2007, 16:56 | |
| I enjoyed it too ~ welcome to WHW M Kei. | |
| Shyam Santhanam Wed, May 2nd 2007, 10:00 | |