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Summer Remedies
 
Posted by Nanda Kumar Sat, Aug 18th 2012, 02:27 :: English
A dash of water
on the face, saves me
from the heat wave

  

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Great one! "saves me" is very effective and reveals an intimacy to the element!
Shyam Santhanam Sat, Aug 18th 2012, 12:33  
  
Thank you, Shyam. Actually, I have found that washing one's face is as good as drinking water on a hot day!
Nanda Kumar Sun, Aug 19th 2012, 01:33  
  
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