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..ah,i believe it..very "haiku way"..i like much..

..>>spiros
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Spiros Zafiris Thu, Sep 6th 2012, 02:38  
  
I enjoyed that last line. My only consideration would be to introduce an indefinite article in the second line.

Alan
Alan Summers Thu, Sep 6th 2012, 04:34  
  
Thank you Spiros and Alan!

Yes Alan !
I generally check intrinsically as a force of habit too , the various possibilities with my own parameters the sentient etymological structural content of my haiku. If all of us resort to the same rules and regulations , it will be less stimulating as individual haiku: so I surmise.

I have had arguments with editors who truncated my haiku cruelly: I refused to publish with them!
I must remember you for literally accepting Renga-s as submitted by me for Gean tree. I once again convey my profound gratitude to you for the magnanimous gesture.


I have seen magazines tentorizing all the haiku they get into what they assume is the right method of haiku as if it is arithmetic! ( Incidentally I am Number theoretician too)

In Wonder Haiku Worlds we try to be as generous and respectful, to each poet: so the most possible variety of usages occur here and hopefully some very good haiku too.


Of course, your suggestion has a tentative validity if we choose another set of tentative paremeters in the discussion of this haiku.
Narayanan Raghunathan Sat, Sep 15th 2012, 13:47  
  
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