I would prefer the first one Spiros! I think "scarves" as a plural noun is preferable to "scarved" as a verb used to adjectify! I Think we could ask for Keith's opinion too.
.thanks very much Narayanan..i truly appreciate
your opinion..not sure what i'll do..i've asked
some poets in a few other sites about this
(not usually so indecisive)..i kinda like "notably
scarved" cause it reads slightly more melodic
..and the line is shortened by one syllable
while still remaining S/L/S..thanks very much..
..>>spiros
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walking faster--
both with notable scarves,
man and dog
walking faster
both notably scarved,
man and dog
walking faster
both scarved notably,
man and dog
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..(C)2012 Spiros Zafiris
..channeled; spirit Ram
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..i think i prefer the second of the three
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your opinion..not sure what i'll do..i've asked
some poets in a few other sites about this
(not usually so indecisive)..i kinda like "notably
scarved" cause it reads slightly more melodic
..and the line is shortened by one syllable
while still remaining S/L/S..thanks very much..
..spiros
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