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The Ease of Change
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| Posted by Magyar Sun, May 6th 2007, 15:04 :: | |||
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springs sweeter nights ease green leaves push their way into |
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| 1st attempt... learning will come. | |||
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| Narayanan, after posting, I saw the similarity between this and your Sijo #2... quite un-intended. This is just how I view this new season. _M |
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| Magyar Sun, May 6th 2007, 15:17 | |
| Dear Magyar, I checked my Sijo#2 and surely the similarity is accidental ! They are still different! You have honoured me by this note! But more so, you have honoured yourself as an exceptionally sincere, sensitive and honest poet! If you had not mentioned, i may not have even noticed this similarity! | |
| Narayanan Raghunathan Wed, May 9th 2007, 23:53 | |
| It is " spring's " I suppose! | |
| Narayanan Raghunathan Wed, May 9th 2007, 23:55 | |
| Very good first attempt in my opinion! | |
| Narayanan Raghunathan Wed, May 9th 2007, 23:56 | |