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Butterflies~
Sedoka#1 
Posted by Narayanan Raghunathan Wed, Jan 25th 2006, 01:51 :: English

magic cosmoses
flutter free in thin air ~
butterflies ascend
mountains of air
dreaming pure nectar
inside wild flowers

This one is an experimental "Sedoka" without adhering to the syllable count.

  


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I like this sedoka Narayanan san. It is like a delicate haiku but projects and suspends the poetic feeling.
Shyam Santhanam Wed, Jan 25th 2006, 09:04  
  

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