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The Stars Above
 
Posted by P. Nandakumar Warrier Wed, Jan 13th 2021, 03:59 :: English

A newborn's future

written in the stars

not in our wild schemes 


  

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A great cosmic piece,Nandakumar ! For greater fluidity, though, I would have written:

A newborn's future
written in the stars
not in our wild schemes
Keith A. Simmonds Wed, Jan 13th 2021, 15:42  
  
Thank you Keith, yes, this reads much better!

Very nice to hear from you after a while...
P. Nandakumar Warrier Tue, Jan 19th 2021, 14:15  
  
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