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Christmas Song ~
Sijo#3 
Posted by Narayanan Raghunathan Wed, Jan 25th 2006, 02:16 :: English

winter again Christmas again
snow flakes float new wonder dreams


the air mellow with carols of light 
scent of cakes and ginger wine 


I stare at the candle flames
await the Apocalyptic Christ ~ 


 


2004-5~


  


Comments
you are a poet rather than haikuist!
cato Wed, Feb 1st 2006, 12:16  
  

It is not clear what you mean cato. I don't think you have read enough of my poetry or Haiku to say that. Actually we have different ideas as to what a Haiku is! Here it is a sijo not a haiku.I am deeply hurt by your judgement.Perhaps that was your motive too,to hurt me. Thank you. I will continue writing Haiku for other people. Incidentally, Haiku is also poetry.
Narayanan Raghunathan Sat, Feb 4th 2006, 05:36  
  

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