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Summer Glow
Posted by
Keith A. Simmonds
Tue, Jul 31st 2007, 08:33 :: English
red butterfly
sighing on a rose...
shafts of sunlight
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Good one Keith ! The word "sighing" is specially used ! Further, it is a haiku with two kigo(s)[ "butterflies and rose" ] and the kire is very effective too.
Narayanan Raghunathan
Sun, Aug 5th 2007, 16:48
Many thanks for the appreciation, Narayanan!
Keith A. Simmonds
Mon, Aug 6th 2007, 09:47
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