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Marathon Day
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| Posted by Marijo Sun, Sep 16th 2007, 02:11 :: English | |||
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a runner checking
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| Comments | |
| An acute sense of sadness felt here,Marijo! | |
| Keith A. Simmonds Wed, Sep 19th 2007, 21:27 | |
| Thank you for comments Keith! | |
| Marijo Thu, Sep 20th 2007, 17:59 | |
| Marijo, a great Senryu. Please send it to Simply Haiku or another magazine. They will surely publish it I feel. Please dont use a full stop at the end of a Haiku unless it is very essential. The end is implicitly understood. Did you try "tinywords" with this Senryu? | |
| Narayanan Raghunathan Wed, Sep 26th 2007, 08:35 | |
| Yes, Narayanan, I sent this to tinywords my second version. The first version was rejected; It was like this: /competition day --/the amputee checks/ on his prosthesis. This was rejected four weeks ago. So I sent the second version (above) over three weeks ago. | |
| Marijo Thu, Sep 27th 2007, 20:10 | |