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- Autumn Walk- I wander away
M-SI-2 
Posted by Magyar Mon, Oct 8th 2007, 18:24 ::

I walk among the fallen leaves
not the discards they seem to be

in a whisper of this silent forest
an owl hunts above these falls

sweeping to a top limb roost
this watchman of the night
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Very Good Magyar! I count the syllables to be 16/17/13 [ total 46!]
Narayanan Raghunathan Thu, Nov 1st 2007, 02:15  
  

Narayanan, I fully appreciate your support and attention! _M
Magyar Fri, Nov 2nd 2007, 16:37  
  

Dear Magyar Could you please remove the empty space if not intended !!
Narayanan Raghunathan Tue, Jan 8th 2008, 21:59  
  

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