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Posted by Crystal Wed, Dec 5th 2007, 01:48 :: English

sacred flames ascend


fiery union of  heaven and earth


as crimson sun descends

How did I miss that ?? Thanks NR :)

  


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Very Good Crystal ! Welcome Back !
Narayanan Raghunathan Thu, Dec 6th 2007, 09:35  
  

Thank you, NR. :)
Crystal Sat, Dec 8th 2007, 12:06  
  

Crystal it should be "descends" grammatically!
Narayanan Raghunathan Sun, Mar 2nd 2008, 09:53  
  

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