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| Posted by Marijo Sun, Feb 10th 2008, 21:12 :: English | |||
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| Interesting imagery, Marijo! Quite thought-provoking! | |
| Keith A. Simmonds Mon, Feb 11th 2008, 06:08 | |
| Majo, 'tis impossible for your dog to walk on clouds, but your puddle's reflection made that happen. This, then, is a well written... hyperbolic truth. Isn't that what haiku ought to be? In my humble opinion, excellent! _m | |
| Magyar Mon, Feb 11th 2008, 13:39 | |
| Thanks Keith, and Magyar thanks for the kind words! | |
| Marijo Tue, Feb 12th 2008, 20:25 | |
| "The reflection of the sky in the waters" is an endless theme for Haiku as you amply demonstrate here in this quiet, yet memorable Haiku! | |
| Narayanan Raghunathan Wed, Feb 13th 2008, 02:58 | |
| Thanks Narayanan for elucidating. | |
| Marijo Wed, Feb 13th 2008, 21:25 | |