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| Posted by Keith A. Simmonds Fri, Feb 22nd 2008, 02:31 :: English | |||
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dark shadows ~ the moon disappearing |
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| Keith this is nice and simple poem about the phenomenon. | |
| Marijo Fri, Feb 22nd 2008, 20:39 | |
| Many thanks for your appreciation, Marijo! I wish I had got a good glimpse of that lunar eclipse...I heard that it was really phenomenal! | |
| Keith A. Simmonds Sat, Feb 23rd 2008, 02:15 | |
| Very quietly eloquent ~ But i wonder if it is more a Haiku than a senryu ! | |
| Narayanan Raghunathan Wed, Feb 27th 2008, 22:43 | |
| Thanks for the comments, Narayanan! I feel, like you, that there is a very fine line that separates this from the haiku! When I first wrote it, I hesitated a great deal between the two, and am happy now to see that you, too, feel it as a haiku! I will transfer it to that section! Many thanks again for reading so meticulously! | |
| Keith A. Simmonds Thu, Feb 28th 2008, 02:08 | |