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Pedestrian
 
Posted by Shyam Santhanam Sat, May 20th 2006, 23:20 :: English
I slow down for him
again like other mornings ~
the squirrel crosses the road
at the same time and
exact same place

  

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There is an element of timelessness about this piece, also a soft bonding, as if this would go on for ever. Nice, well framed.
Prithviraj Bhaskar Shankar Sun, Jun 18th 2006, 06:03  
  
i like the way you speak of your relationship with this squirrel, Shyam. And how you take us into this world via your tanka. And i like the way your tanka can be read aloud which is how waka (tanka) was originally transmitted and for which it was originally designed.
Robert Wilson Mon, Jul 17th 2006, 00:10  
  
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