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Springtide
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| Posted by Keith A. Simmonds Sat, Mar 1st 2008, 04:04 :: English | |||
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cherry blossoms stuck in my hair... a spring in my step |
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| Malayalam translation by Narayanan Raghunathan. Posted on Sat, Mar 1st 2008, 10:02 | |||
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cherryblossomukakl
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| Keith this is closer to a haiku i surmise ! | |
| Narayanan Raghunathan Sat, Mar 1st 2008, 10:04 | |
| At first, I thought it could work as a haiku, but when I considered the subtle use of the word "spring", I decided against it. Many thanks for the observation,Narayanan! | |
| Keith A. Simmonds Sat, Mar 1st 2008, 11:05 | |