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Spring
 
Posted by Marijo Thu, Mar 6th 2008, 19:59 :: English

early spring --
humming birds and bees
whispering to the blossoms

 

 


  

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A beautiful one, Marijo! The use of onomatopaeia here brings out the music of early spring remarkably well! I love it!
Keith A. Simmonds Fri, Mar 7th 2008, 03:49  
  
Ah yes, Majo_! Simple words driving deeply and adding to... instead of taking from... your inspirational thought! _m
Magyar Fri, Mar 7th 2008, 07:07  
  
good one Marijo
John McDonald Fri, Mar 7th 2008, 07:10  
  
Thank you guys.
Marijo Sat, Mar 8th 2008, 10:59  
  
Merci ....:)
Reza Aerabi Tue, Mar 13th 2012, 04:38  
  
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