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Spring
Posted by
Marijo
Thu, Mar 6th 2008, 19:59 :: English
early spring --
humming birds and bees
whispering to the blossoms
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A beautiful one, Marijo! The use of onomatopaeia here brings out the music of early spring remarkably well! I love it!
Keith A. Simmonds
Fri, Mar 7th 2008, 03:49
Ah yes, Majo_! Simple words driving deeply and adding to... instead of taking from... your inspirational thought! _m
Magyar
Fri, Mar 7th 2008, 07:07
good one Marijo
John McDonald
Fri, Mar 7th 2008, 07:10
Thank you guys.
Marijo
Sat, Mar 8th 2008, 10:59
Merci ....:)
Reza Aerabi
Tue, Mar 13th 2012, 04:38
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