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...with round-eyed trust...she appreciates the gesture...
Rebba Singh Sat, Mar 15th 2008, 23:18

How can trust be round-eyed?
Geert Verbeke Sun, Mar 16th 2008, 03:28

when it is unexpected... sometimes the reaction of someone you trust can amaze you... the shoe could have been thrown at whatever 'caused' the kitten to yowl...
Rebba Singh Sun, Mar 16th 2008, 06:04

Sorry my dear but my haiku need no riddles, they are simple observations without speaking in riddles.
Geert Verbeke Sun, Mar 16th 2008, 11:00

an observation and perception again geert... not a riddle... if i read again and again...it shows me the same simple picture of... loud wailing a frightened kitten (looking straight at me...round-eyed) you throw your shoe (at whoever frightened the kitten...) simple...
Rebba Singh Sun, Mar 16th 2008, 11:29

Dear, You where talking about the unexpected, that is a riddle to me.:-) A second is: why repeating a simple observation? A haiku needs no X-ray examination because a haiku is only a dewdrop(in my perception).
Geert Verbeke Sun, Mar 16th 2008, 11:41

...and differing perceptions have their own -individual values-. Is my observation in error because it fails to match another's perception_? _m
Magyar Sun, Mar 16th 2008, 12:08

noted... brave little round-eyed kitten... your shoe missed the kitten geert... it got me... unexpectedly... it leaves me round eyed too... yet i trust you... and appreciate your spontaneous observation...perception...and momentous reaction to the situation... i promise not to caterwaul again...
Rebba Singh Sun, Mar 16th 2008, 12:11

looking through the shivering branches... a frightened kitten
sarah Sun, Mar 16th 2008, 13:15

Indeed Magyar, I'm not that retarded. Nobody talks about your observations or about errors. I was only talking about my own spontaneous observations. And dear Rebba, I give you a big hug. And one flower to Sarah.
Geert Verbeke Sun, Mar 16th 2008, 13:16

leaves sway to breeze flowers coloring drive ways
Rebba Singh Sun, Mar 16th 2008, 13:20

3/17/08 0815: Geert, I did not employ, nor did I imply the word chosen by you -retarded-. I hereby, and humbly, apologize for any misunderstanding caused by the feckless use of my native tongue. Sincerely, _m.
Magyar Mon, Mar 17th 2008, 07:14

Dear Magyar, no apologizes dear friend when I have chosen for self-mockery. That's my own feckless style.
Geert Verbeke Mon, Mar 17th 2008, 11:03

Very simple, yet thought-provoking in its simplicity! That is real haiku! See the ideas it has generated! Thanks for sharing it with us, geert!
Keith A. Simmonds Tue, Mar 18th 2008, 04:53

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