Posted by Timothy MFEMF Tue, Mar 18th 2008, 18:15 :: English
Heavenly Sleep In the night I sleepMan, I fall in a deep sleepI hear father GodIt is a delightful soundI don't wake up until morn.
Comments
This is my first poem here. So I hope everyone likes it. And if they don't I will have to improve my poem skills. But take it easy on me I am only a beginner.
Timothy,
poetry asks a lot of reading and re-reading. Skills ask years of study and a sober mind attitude. So take it easy, accept that not everyone likes poetry. What we all need is: work, work and work to avoid mediocrity. Writing is a real profession. I wish you a lot of insight, energy and enthusiasm for hard work.
Timothy,
_You have the most important tools, imagination, desire, and the determination to write; sharpen them as you would a knife.
_I think we (here) would all agree, that no matter how long WE have written, WE are still learning our craft.
_You have a fine start with your posting here of 'Heavenly Sleep, writing is learning... keep writing! _m
poetry asks a lot of reading and re-reading. Skills ask years of study and a sober mind attitude. So take it easy, accept that not everyone likes poetry. What we all need is: work, work and work to avoid mediocrity. Writing is a real profession. I wish you a lot of insight, energy and enthusiasm for hard work.
_You have the most important tools, imagination, desire, and the determination to write; sharpen them as you would a knife.
_I think we (here) would all agree, that no matter how long WE have written, WE are still learning our craft.
_You have a fine start with your posting here of 'Heavenly Sleep, writing is learning... keep writing! _m