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Courage of A Lion
Posted by Timothy MFEMF Wed, Mar 19th 2008, 17:22 :: English
Look into my eyes After, tell me what you see do you see courage the courage inside of me I am a raging lion.

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Dear young friend, please read about lions...they are not that courageous. And again: if you use capitals then please use also interpunction. With a wink: don't beg to much for compliments. You are good or you are not, your readers can't change that.
Geert Verbeke Thu, Mar 20th 2008, 04:54

Dear Timothy, please respond to your email. Yours Kindly
Shyam Santhanam Fri, Mar 21st 2008, 00:55

Timothy, your poem is excellent. Thanks for asking your mom for permission to be here. I was just reminding you to do that. Please keep writing!
Shyam Santhanam Wed, Mar 26th 2008, 16:32

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