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wonder haiku worlds
 
Posted by Rebba Singh Tue, Apr 8th 2008, 05:11 :: English

i do...try

immensely ~

to express the self  

in this garden of words

 

regrets

a victim of habit ~

often i get tied up

in the bouquet of your mode of thought

Hindi translation by Rebba Singh. Posted on Tue, Apr 8th 2008, 05:16

koshish toh...kartae hain hum

bahut ~

ki khud ko paesh karain

iss gulestaan-e-shabdaan mein

 

affsoos

aadat se majboor ~

aksar bandh jaatae hain hum

aap ke khyaalaat-e-guldastae mein 

 


  


Comments
Ah... but being tied up "in the bouquet of your mode of thought" indicates a depth of understanding. A poets garden of words/thought. Just my humble view. _m
Magyar Tue, Apr 8th 2008, 09:16  
  

Good One Rebba ! The Hindi version is richer in texture!
Narayanan Raghunathan Wed, Apr 9th 2008, 05:27  
  

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