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Father's
Father's countenance 
Posted by Vasile Moldovan Wed, Aug 30th 2006, 09:18 :: English
Father's countenance
in the lighter's faint glimmer
unrecognisable...
The puffing of his old pipe
unchanged for a whole lifetime.

Obrazul tatei
in lumina brichetei
de nerecunoscut...
Pufaitul din pipa
neschimbat de o viata

  

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I like the contrast between father's countenance so much changed and the puffing of his old pipe unchanged for o whole lifetime. This contrast increase the ephemeral nature of the life…

Magdalena Dale Tue, Oct 3rd 2006, 04:56  
  
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