WonderHaikuWorlds

# 10
Posted by Rebba Singh Fri, Apr 11th 2008, 12:14 :: English
strange is this world ~ you speak from your heart rebba people listen with their brain

Hindi translation by Rebba Singh. Posted on Fri, Apr 11th 2008, 12:15

ajab hai yeh duniya ~ tu dil se boalti hai rebba loag dimaag se sunntae hain

Comments
Nice one Rebba ! You are writing a personalized version of Senryu! It may actually be an extension of the possibilities of the genre Ha~ bilkul ~ "our o dimmaag kharaab bhi hai"!
Narayanan Raghunathan Fri, Apr 11th 2008, 21:51

There is deep felt pain in this Senryu ~
Narayanan Raghunathan Fri, Apr 11th 2008, 21:52

oops...to the first comment vishnu... and...hmm...for the second...
Rebba Singh Fri, Apr 11th 2008, 23:45

Yes, Rebba, I like the impressive use of soliloquy to get across your message about the delicacy of creative writing in general and senryu in particular!
Keith A. Simmonds Tue, Aug 5th 2008, 05:04

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