» About your hosts » The Brahman Way of Haiku » The mission of WHW »Guestbook »Inform a Friend »Contacts
letter size:

Wonder Haiku Worlds

Login| Register
Site Home| About This Site| About Haiku And Other Genres| Links| Browse Members

Back to list

  

Autumn day
 
Posted by Maria Tirenescu Thu, Aug 31st 2006, 13:25 ::

 
           
            During the strike from this autumn, on a Thursday, a phone call announces a meeting with all the leaders from this area.
 
            Rains insistently -
            scattered by wind

            leaves everywhere


 

Pitiless rain in Cugir. I make up my mind rapidly. I get into Dacia. A trip in such conditions is difficult. I will be a copilot as at so many  other times.

At road, traffic intense. The cars have their headlights on. They drive cautiously. Until Vintu de Jos, we drive much slowly as usual.
 
At the barrier -
dozen of cars are waiting
only one train
 
The road is free. We steal among full waterholes. It rains no more. My eye is caught by a small house.
 
On old fence
invaded by lonicera -
last flowers
 
Next, an unpopulated house.
 
Across the fence
only a raspberry -
the last from this year
 
On leaving Vint, we can improve the speed. I have time to look towards the sky. The clouds are scattering. Behind us, the sun.
 
Double rainbow
from Acmar to Alba -
bow spreaded through clouds
 
Cheered up by the rainbow, the road seems easier, Alba Iulia closer.
 
Wet pavement -
maple-leaves burning
cover it
 
Warmed up by sun, the bimillenial city is much hospitable. Waiting the meeting end, I wander to the shops and admire the leaves from the trees which start their flight...
 
 

 

Romanian translation by Maria Tirenescu. Posted on Sun, Mar 9th 2008, 15:12

In timpul grevei din aceasta toamna, intr-o zi de joi, un telefon anunta ca urmeaza o sedinta cu liderii de zona.

Ploua insistent –
imprastiate de vant
frunze pretutindeni

Ploaie nemiloasa la Cugir. Ma hotarasc rapid. Urc in Dacie. Un drum in astfel de conditii e dificil. Voi fi, ca de atatea ori, copilot.


Pe sosea e circula?ie intensa. Masinile au farurile aprinse. Se circula cu prudenta. Pana la Vintul de Jos, mergem mult mai incet ca de obicei.

La bariera –
zeci de masini asteapta
un singur tren

Drumul e liber. Ne strecuram printre gropile pline de apa. Nu mai ploua. Privirea imi este atrasa de o casa mica.

Pe gardul cel vechi
napadit de caprifoi –
ultimele flori

Alaturi, o casa nelocuita.

Dincolo de gard
doar un bob de zmeura –
ultimul din acest an

La iesirea din Vint, putem mari viteza. Am timp sa privesc spre cer. Norii se imprastie. In spatele nostru, soarele.

Curcubeu dublu
de la Acmar la Alba –
arc intins prin nori

Inveselita de curcubeu, drumul mi se pare mai usor, Alba Iulia mai aproape.

Trotuarul ud –
frunze de artar ce ard
il acopera

Incalzit de soare, municipiul bimilenarl este mult mai primitor. Asteptand sa se termine sedinta, colind magazinele si admir frunzele copacilor care isi iau zborul…


  


Comments
Beautiful Haibun Maria! ~~~ Please correct the following typo errors. "copilot as at so many other times" ~~ "headlights" ~~ "full waterholes" ~~ "My eye is caught by a small house." ~~~~ "by the rainbow" ~~"bimillenial"
Narayanan Raghunathan Fri, Oct 6th 2006, 09:05  
  

Thank you, I’ll rectify. Respectfully yours!
Maria Tirenescu Fri, Oct 6th 2006, 10:16  
  

Please
login to post comment.
About This Site || About Haiku And Other Genres || Links || Site Home || Browse Members
Copyright 2008 / All rights reserved