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fragrant
Posted by Shyam Santhanam Tue, May 6th 2008, 23:50 :: English
fragrant darkness ~ a distant plane tapers into cricket songs

Hindi translation by Rebba Singh. Posted on Wed, May 7th 2008, 01:00

khushboodaar andhakaar ~ ek doorsth jaahaaz shoondaakaar hua jheenguron ke geet mein

Comments
lovely one shyam
John McDonald Wed, May 7th 2008, 02:49

Shayam, I love the cricket's song... overcoming the sound of the plane... and sweetening the night. _m
Magyar Wed, May 7th 2008, 18:56

Great appeal to the senses, Shyam! Well articulated!
Keith A. Simmonds Thu, May 8th 2008, 13:04

Thanks gentlemen for the appreciations. Thanks Rebba ji for the melodious translation.
Shyam Santhanam Wed, May 14th 2008, 13:22

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