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Valley
 
Posted by Keith A. Simmonds Thu, May 8th 2008, 12:48 :: English
down the valley...
a lonely traveller
seeking a lily
Hindi translation by Rebba Singh. Posted on Fri, May 9th 2008, 02:47

vaadion mein...

ek asaahaae musaafir

dhoondae kumud


  


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Keith, I love this one!

Ah, this wanderer seeks the prize, the lily of the... . I wander in dreams, always looking for the 'lily.' _m
Magyar Thu, May 8th 2008, 14:39  
  

yes love it keith
John McDonald Thu, May 8th 2008, 16:23  
  

Beautiful Haiku Keith!
Narayanan Raghunathan Thu, May 8th 2008, 18:13  
  

Many thanks, Magyar, John and Narayanan, for your appreciations! And thanks, also, Rebba, for the Hindi translation!
Keith A. Simmonds Sat, May 10th 2008, 21:01  
  

always a pleasure keith to translate your wonderful words...
Rebba Singh Sat, May 10th 2008, 21:17  
  

Many thanks, Rebba, for the heartfelt appreciation! I,too, am fascinated by the beauty of the Eastern translations and wish I could speak Hindi!
Keith A. Simmonds Tue, May 13th 2008, 04:23  
  

at the rate i am going keith...you guys will be recognizing and speaking hindustani words soon enough...
Rebba Singh Tue, May 13th 2008, 05:01  
  

Beautiful! Keith, any further comments seem superfluous. One of your best, in my mind, if you don't mind me saying! I hope to leisurely write an elucidation later.
Shyam Santhanam Thu, May 15th 2008, 15:41  
  

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