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I did the first assignment.
Timothy MFEMF Fri, May 9th 2008, 15:31

Dear Timothy, first please write a letter and discuss with Shyam who is your guide through the Haiku village junior. This is more like a senryu in my opinion. But I like it. Further as a young person you need not worry about these tentative etiquette(s) of clasification I pick up from our site the following Haiku ! dressed up a bride I await Amanda auntie's phone-call from England Lakshmni Anand [ Age 13 ] my periappa sings all to himself looking into the mirror Note ~ Periappa [ Tamizh ]~ Father's elder brother Ganga Anand [ Age 9 ] looking at the games I play with it , the ball will think, I am mad [ Translated from Tamizh ] Ganga Anand [ Age 9] The following Haiku and images are from the following site. http://www.jal-foundation.or.jp/html/haiku/sakuhinY/esakuhinY.htm http://www.jal-foundation.or.jp/html/haiku/saijiki/esaijikiS.htm In the pouring rain Children are running quickly in haste In a hurry to get home Yun Fang Cheah age 12 Female Malaysia The brook flows The clouds give water And help the brook Nikita Tsvetkov age 9 Male Russia I am called a clown I make them laugh and happy I have a funny face Raissa Nurahma age 12 Countless fireflies Hang across an endless field with lanterns Sailors have lost their way Gianluca Sordi Birds flying too fast Slow clouds moving across sky Hey, stay out of my lane! Maelene Blechel age 9 Guam Cloudy bear Flying among the clouds How does the world look from there? Ilya Belyaev age 10 Russia At the fruit shop I saw rows of sad apples So I took one Farah Azmi age 12 EGYPT Flowers bloom in spring To us happiness they bring With the hymn they sing Michelle Amoroso age 12 Philippines Pretty butterfly Fly high up into the sky Come back tomorrow Nicole Sisk age 7 GUAM (ã‚°ã‚¢ãƒ ) http://www.jal-foundation.or.jp/html/haiku/sakuhinY/esakuhinY.htm http://www.jal-foundation.or.jp/html/haiku/saijiki/esaijikiS.htm Dear Timothy, if you observe, your haiku is similar to the following one in structure. Your Haiku is a very genuine and good and autobiographical. Best Wishes to you . Please correspond with Shyam. "I am called a clown I make them laugh and happy I have a funny face " Raissa Nurahma age 12
Narayanan Raghunathan Fri, May 9th 2008, 21:55

Tim, great work. I will be writing back soon, give me a few days. Thanks.
Shyam Santhanam Thu, May 15th 2008, 15:37

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