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Posted by John McDonald Mon, May 12th 2008, 02:55 :: English

spring breeze  -
young leaves
try out their voices
Scots translation by John McDonald. Posted on Mon, May 12th 2008, 02:56

voar tirl  -
youthie leaves
pruive thair vices
Hindi translation by Rebba Singh. Posted on Mon, May 12th 2008, 06:55

falgun sameer -

nanhi pattiaan

apni aawaazain parakhain

  


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thanks Rebba
John McDonald Mon, May 12th 2008, 07:06  
  

"Young leaves // try out their voices"
Love it John. Wispering willows?
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Magyar Mon, May 12th 2008, 17:34  
  

Like this very much John.
Marijo Mon, May 12th 2008, 18:42  
  

lovely
jagannath rao adukuri Tue, May 13th 2008, 01:25  
  

Great use of language to evoke a sense of nature, John!
Keith A. Simmonds Tue, May 13th 2008, 04:31  
  

thanks my friends
John McDonald Tue, May 13th 2008, 04:53  
  

Yes I can imagine (though haven't noticed) how the young leaves would not quite sound like the older ones. You've alerted me to that. Now I'll be listening out for the young leaves to check how they sound! Thanks John.
Shyam Santhanam Thu, May 15th 2008, 15:33  
  

thanks shyam
John McDonald Thu, May 15th 2008, 16:20  
  

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