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thanks Rebba
John McDonald Tue, May 13th 2008, 06:10  
  

bummer veesits the hoose o john mcdonald...tae lou's haiku...at'r ain slaw raik...pen an jotter i haun...
Rebba Singh Tue, May 13th 2008, 08:18  
  

well done Rebba
John McDonald Tue, May 13th 2008, 10:17  
  

…bricht een goave…reengin fir's sang…rhymin awthing…
foryettin…myndin…foryettin...awthing aw day…
rebba chaaves on…juist gaitherin fuitprents tae wyve the haiku tae yin…joukin an jinkin
the crottilt warl … raxin tae glisk…
…ower muckle leukin o bonnie haiku …at wonder haiku warls…yin bi yin…ilka day…
thair haiku skiffs me…
taigilt in refleckshuns…a green haar panders awa… aulder…

…bright eyes gaze…searching for his song…repeating everything… forgetting…remembering…forgetting…everything all day…
rebba struggles on…just gathering footprints to weave the haiku to one…dodging and ducking
the fragmented world …straining to see…
…too much viewing of beautiful haiku …at wonder haiku worlds…one by one…every day… their haiku touches me…
tangled in reflections…a green mist drifts away…older…
Rebba Singh Tue, May 13th 2008, 10:21  
  

how absolutely wonderful
John McDonald Tue, May 13th 2008, 10:33  
  

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