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# 14
 
Posted by Rebba Singh Thu, Jun 19th 2008, 06:00 :: English

the partridge clucks

rolling a long tongue to whistle:

wonderful is thy world 

Hindi translation by Rebba Singh. Posted on Thu, Jun 19th 2008, 06:04

teetar tuchkay

lambi zuban samaet seetee bajaayae:

subhaan teri kudrat 


  


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reza...subhaan and kudrat are pharsi expressions i think....?

the black partridge clucks a few times before whistling to praise the lord's wonderful world...
cluck
cluck
tee tee teterit
tee tee teterit
tee tee teterit

sounds like:
subhaan teri kudrat
subhaan teri kudrat
subhaan teri kudrat

wonderful is Thy world
wonderful is Thy world
wonderful is Thy world
Rebba Singh Thu, Jun 19th 2008, 07:03  
  

Rebba, I really like this one ! The partridge knows this world is wonderfull... as do we.

Yeah, I know... metaphor, but another "echo."

this world
full of wonderous chaos
a flock of crows
_m
Magyar Fri, Jun 20th 2008, 07:13  
  

no magyar...you don't echo...you reciprocate...in feeling...
...
this world
full of wonderous chaos
a flock of crows
_m

yeh duniya
achambhon se ghaplaa-e-gadgad
kauon ka jhundh
Rebba Singh Fri, Jun 20th 2008, 07:42  
  

A really good feel for the realities of nature, Rebba!
Keith A. Simmonds Tue, Aug 5th 2008, 04:48  
  

Good Rebba ~ I thank you and Magyar ~
Narayanan Raghunathan Mon, Aug 18th 2008, 09:59  
  

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