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Posted by Maria Tirenescu Wed, Jul 23rd 2008, 02:46 :: English

wooden bridge of village –

a cart with the ox crosses

sluggish and creaking

Romanian translation by Maria Tirenescu. Posted on Wed, Jul 23rd 2008, 02:47

podul de lemn al satului –

o caruta cu boi trece

lenes si scartaind


  

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Nice Haiku Maria ! I think you may simplify the English translation as follows.

village wooden-bridge –
an ox cart crosses
sluggish and creaking
Narayanan Raghunathan Thu, Jul 24th 2008, 00:30  
  
Thank you, Narayanan!
Maria Tirenescu Thu, Jul 24th 2008, 01:15  
  
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