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Posted by Maria Tirenescu Tue, Aug 5th 2008, 16:34 :: English
First frost... Only the chrysanthemum unshaken. Near the Turkish jetty, I wait for my lover.

Romanian translation by Maria Tirenescu. Posted on Tue, Aug 5th 2008, 16:36

Prima bruma... Numai crizantema nescuturata. Langa debarcaderul turc, imi astept iubitul.
Hindi translation by Rebba Singh. Posted on Sun, Sep 7th 2008, 01:18

abal kohra-e-sheeth... sirf guldaudi naa hilee. nazdeek turq-e-kinaara, intizaar mein hum apne mehboob ki

Comments
Nice Tanka. Dear Maria slight corrections in the English version. First frost... Only the chrysanthemum unshaken . Near the Turkish jetty, I wait for my lover. Please post "Romanian translation" instead of "English translation"
Narayanan Raghunathan Wed, Aug 13th 2008, 12:44

Thank you! I'll rectify!
Maria Tirenescu Wed, Aug 13th 2008, 13:14

Thank you, Rebba, for the translation!
Maria Tirenescu Tue, Oct 14th 2008, 13:52

i wait for your photographs...maria !!
Rebba Singh Mon, Nov 24th 2008, 10:19

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