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Crying by the ocean
 
Posted by Malini Rao Thu, Aug 7th 2008, 16:08 :: English

Muffling my loud cries,
Soothing ocean waves
And the setting sun
 

Hindi translation by Rebba Singh. Posted on Sun, Aug 17th 2008, 00:22

mera phoot-phoot kar rona dabbaain

maharam-e-saagar ki leharain

aur doobta suraj 

 

 


  


Comments
Nice Senryu Malini ~

Most haiku writers in English don't capitalize the first letters of each line. It maybe better to remove the capitals if you are sending the senryu to a magazine.
Narayanan Raghunathan Fri, Aug 8th 2008, 03:58  
  

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