Posted by Malini Rao Thu, Aug 7th 2008, 16:08 :: English
Muffling my loud cries, Soothing ocean waves And the setting sun
Hindi translation by Rebba Singh. Posted on Sun, Aug 17th 2008, 00:22
mera phoot-phoot kar rona dabbaain
maharam-e-saagar ki leharain
aur doobta suraj
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Nice Senryu Malini ~
Most haiku writers in English don't capitalize the first letters of each line. It maybe better to remove the capitals if you are sending the senryu to a magazine.
Most haiku writers in English don't capitalize the first letters of each line. It maybe better to remove the capitals if you are sending the senryu to a magazine.