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spider
 
Posted by Maria Tirenescu Wed, Aug 13th 2008, 12:30 :: English

autumn evening –

a spider in the cobweb

quietly watching

Romanian translation by Maria Tirenescu. Posted on Wed, Aug 13th 2008, 12:32

seara de toamna -

paianjenul pe panza

pandind in liniste

 

Hindi translation by Rebba Singh. Posted on Fri, Aug 15th 2008, 10:49

patjhard ki shaam -

makarda jaal mein 

chupchaap daekhae

Farsi translation by sarah. Posted on Mon, Aug 18th 2008, 16:15
عصر پاییز-
عنکبوتی در تار
آرام نگریستن

  


Comments
Very subdued but powerful Maria! If you did not intend bold letters for the last line, i request you to convert it to normal size!
Narayanan Raghunathan Wed, Aug 13th 2008, 12:38  
  

Maria.
_Some American Indians refer to the spider's web as a "Dream Catcher." Your words, here, are a clear definition of that... that silent wait. _m
Magyar Wed, Aug 13th 2008, 13:06  
  

i'm thinking "i'm that spider watching the world" :-)
sarah Thu, Aug 14th 2008, 17:20  
  

Yes, Maria, there is a sense of expectancy in this painting! One gets the feeling that a drama is about to unfold from this simple portrayal!
Keith A. Simmonds Sat, Aug 16th 2008, 03:53  
  

You are right, Keith! I have thinks like you.
Maria Tirenescu Mon, Aug 18th 2008, 15:19  
  

Thank you, Sarah and Magyar, for comments! Thank you, Rebba, for the translation!
Maria Tirenescu Mon, Aug 18th 2008, 15:47  
  

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