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jelly fishes
 
Posted by Maria Tirenescu Wed, Aug 13th 2008, 12:40 :: English

storm at sea

and the jelly fishes –

children crying

Romanian translation by Maria Tirenescu. Posted on Wed, Aug 13th 2008, 12:41

furtuna in larg 

si meduze la mal –

copiii strigand

Hindi translation by Rebba Singh. Posted on Fri, Aug 15th 2008, 10:45

tufaan-e-saagar

aur jelly fishes -

bachchae roain 


  


Comments
Maria,
Please change first line to "storm out at sea" or "storm at sea" .

The toriawase is strange ! the shift is dramatic!
Narayanan Raghunathan Wed, Aug 13th 2008, 12:50  
  

Now it is well? Thank for the assistance!
Maria Tirenescu Wed, Aug 13th 2008, 13:23  
  

Great one, Maria!
Keith A. Simmonds Sat, Aug 16th 2008, 04:04  
  

Thank you, Rebba, for the translation!
Maria Tirenescu Mon, Aug 18th 2008, 15:44  
  

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