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waterfall
Posted by Maria Tirenescu Thu, Aug 14th 2008, 01:53 :: English
big noise of waterfall audible from a distance – the evening walk

Romanian translation by Maria Tirenescu. Posted on Thu, Aug 14th 2008, 01:54

sunetul cascadei se aude din departare – plimbare de seara
English translation by Rebba Singh. Posted on Fri, Aug 15th 2008, 07:53

jharne ka shor dur se sunai de - shaam ka ttaehalna

Comments
Maria, the verb "listens" is inappropriate in this context. Checking, the Romanian, the following possible versions suggested to me big noise of waterfall resounds from a distance – the evening walk big noise of waterfall audible from a distance – the evening walk big noise of waterfall echoes from a distance – the evening walk
Narayanan Raghunathan Thu, Aug 14th 2008, 02:10

Thank you, Narayanan! I learn...
Maria Tirenescu Thu, Aug 14th 2008, 02:12

I endorse Narayanan's insight into this one, Maria! We are lucky to have such positive criticism!
Keith A. Simmonds Sat, Aug 16th 2008, 04:00

I have the luck and the bosom friends. Thank you!
Maria Tirenescu Mon, Aug 18th 2008, 15:14

Thank you, Rebba, for the translation!
Maria Tirenescu Mon, Aug 18th 2008, 15:41

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