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toward the beach
Posted by Maria Tirenescu Thu, Aug 14th 2008, 01:58 :: English
the boat swings – I look toward the beach among the seagulls

Romanian translation by Maria Tirenescu. Posted on Thu, Aug 14th 2008, 01:59

vaporul se leagana – privesc spre tarm printre pescarusi
Hindi translation by Rebba Singh. Posted on Fri, Aug 15th 2008, 09:44

naav jhulae - maein daekhun tat seagullon ke beech

Comments
A good marine haiku, Maria!
Keith A. Simmonds Sat, Aug 16th 2008, 03:57

Yes a good marine haiku Maria ! I agree with Keith. It is so subdued and one can feel the swinging boat and the shore with seagulls
Narayanan Raghunathan Sat, Aug 16th 2008, 05:44

Thank you, Keith and Narayanan!
Maria Tirenescu Mon, Aug 18th 2008, 15:10

Thank you, Rebba, for the translation!
Maria Tirenescu Mon, Aug 18th 2008, 15:38

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