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| Posted by Narayanan Raghunathan Tue, Aug 19th 2008, 00:40 :: English | |||
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raindrops make rhythms on the roof ~ an autumn silence |
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| Malayalam translation by Narayanan Raghunathan. Posted on Tue, Aug 19th 2008, 01:03 | |||
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മഴതതുള്ളികളുടെ താളം കൂരപ്പുറത്ത് ~ ഒരു ഹേമന്ത മൌനം mazhathullikalude thaalam koorappurathu oru hemantha mownam |
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| Hindi translation by Rebba Singh. Posted on Tue, Aug 19th 2008, 01:45 | |||
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barasti boondain bani taaleenik chhat par ~ peher chup pathjhard ka |
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(is it koorapurathu or ottinpurathu?)
Nanda
I had considered both the possibilities: "koorapurathu" appears etymologically broader so i retained it ! Further, the 'koora' [the roof] was multiple materials asbestos, tin and odu [ tile].
But "ottin purathu" sounds more musical and appropriate from another perspective! I am doubtful myself!