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Shooting star
 
Posted by Keith A. Simmonds Wed, Sep 3rd 2008, 05:02 :: English

a shooting star:
on a placid ocean
vibrant voices

Hindi translation by Rebba Singh. Posted on Wed, Sep 3rd 2008, 05:44

toottataa taara:

sakoon-e-saagar mein

jhanjhanaati aawaazein 

Romanian translation by Maria Tirenescu. Posted on Fri, Sep 5th 2008, 13:44

o stea cazatoare:

pe oceanul calm

voci sonore


  


Comments
keith
thank you
it gives me immense pleasure
to read your wonderful words
i try and translate them always ~
into hindustani ~ to the best of my ability
Rebba Singh Wed, Sep 3rd 2008, 05:46  
  

Keith... I like the sense of voices stretching across the quiet. One always wonders, from where do they come? _m
Magyar Wed, Sep 3rd 2008, 08:03  
  

wonderful...

from within...of course...
i am eaves dropping...yet again magyar...
just couldn't resist...listening...to the silences
pardon me keith...
Rebba Singh Thu, Sep 4th 2008, 21:58  
  

Thank you, Rebba, for the promptness with which you manage to do your translations! And many thanks, too, to Magyar for his appreciation!
Keith A. Simmonds Fri, Sep 5th 2008, 04:17  
  

Many thanks, Rebba, for your appreciative and insightful comments of my work! I am sure that your translations will do justice to the thoughts expressed! Thanks also to Magyar for the appreciation, and also to Maria for the Romanian translation!
Keith A. Simmonds Mon, Sep 8th 2008, 10:57  
  

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